[cap-talk] Second ABAC Google talk is now up

[Kenton Varda]

I thought it was sort of hard to follow what overall points you were trying
to make in the talk.  The information seemed to be there, but it wasn't
always clear where you were going with it (or, it wouldn't be clear if I
hadn't been familiar with the topic already).  Perhaps you could try stating
your thesis more clearly before getting into the details, and repeat it now
and then as you go.  Emphasize it so that people can more easily understand
what statements are key points and what statements are just background
information.

On 7/14/06, Mark Miller <erights at gmail.com> wrote:
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> http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-8527120258517176598&q=google+engedu
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> I think this talk could have been much better, and hope to improve it,
> so feedback appreciated. Thanks.
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>     Cheers,
>     --MarkM
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