[cap-talk] Second ABAC Google talk is now up

[Mark S. Miller]

Kenton Varda wrote:
> I thought it was sort of hard to follow what overall points you were 
> trying to make in the talk.  The information seemed to be there, but it 
> wasn't always clear where you were going with it (or, it wouldn't be 
> clear if I hadn't been familiar with the topic already).  Perhaps you 
> could try stating your thesis more clearly before getting into the 
> details, and repeat it now and then as you go.  Emphasize it so that 
> people can more easily understand what statements are key points and 
> what statements are just background information.

Good suggestions. Thanks.

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